milk chocolate

Use lots of WOW words to describe your experience while eating the chocolate. Use your 5 senses.  - See, Hear, Feel, Taste, Smell5

Attempt 1 When Mrs McGuinniety opened the chocolate. My mouth started  watering because all the people like chocolate. I felt like a hungry because I’m eating chocolate. Mrs McGuinniety opened the chocolate. I heard the rip opened like cellotape. I saw like a pyramid a mesing in the top. I tasted the chocolate in my mouth like a milo. It tasted like a waterfall. It smelt like a creamy milk.

Attempt 2

my many coloured days writing

This is my Thing Link for my Many Coloured Days Writing. I used Ting-link  to show my writing . I have to put my link on the rainbow that match the color in my writing