A new school new uniform

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Introduction Hook Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new. What is the argument? I think we should have a new uniform for our new school because it is a new start. We could have winter and summer uniforms. It is a modern school we should have a modern look.
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Main Point Paragraph 1 New start. New look	Show a new school to other people Start everything new. Do not keep the old uniform
Main Point Paragraph 2 Winter and Summer uniform	In Winter we could have long  sleeved tops and a different top for Summer. So we feel comfortable in cold weather. I come from the Philippines. When I first came to South Hornby School I was cold because we didn't have a winter uniform. The uniform we wear only suits the Summer. We learn when we are comfortable. If we are too hot or too cold we find it hard to learn.
Main Point Paragraph 3 New uniform	It’s time to get a new uniform for a new school It’s time for a change a new uniform for a new school
Conclusion / Summary In my opinion I think that uniforms are great to wear to school. But it is time for a new uniform when we move into the new school. Get out the old uniform and do not keep it forever.

Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new. I think we should have a new uniform for our new school because it is a new start. We could have winter and summer uniforms. It is a modern school we should have a modern look.

The first reason we need a new uniform is because you can show a new school to people. Start everything new. Do not keep the old uniform because it’s a new school new uniform.

The second reason a winter and summer uniform because we feel comfortable in cold weather. I come from the Philippines. When I first came to South Hornby School I was cold because we didn't have a winter uniform. The uniform we wear only suits the Summer. We learn when we are comfortable. If we are too hot or too cold we find it hard to learn.

The third reason have a new uniform because It’s time to get a new uniform for a new school. It’s time for a change a new uniform for a new school because Mr M want a new school then we need a new uniform.

In my opinion I think that uniforms are great to wear to school. But it is time for a new uniform when we move into the new school. Get out the old uniform and do not keep it forever because we need a new start .