Use lots of WOW words to describe your experience while eating the chocolate. Use your 5 senses. - See, Hear, Feel, Taste, Smell5
Attempt 1
When Mrs McGuinniety opened the chocolate. My mouth started watering because all the people like chocolate. I felt like a hungry because I’m eating chocolate. Mrs McGuinniety opened the chocolate. I heard the rip opened like cellotape. I saw like a pyramid a mesing in the top. I tasted the chocolate in my mouth like a milo. It tasted like a waterfall. It smelt like a creamy milk.
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Attempt 2
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