I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 14 November 2016
Friday, 4 November 2016
A new school new uniform
Plan Template
Introduction
Hook
Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new.
What is the argument?
I think we should have a new uniform for our new school because it is a new start. We could have winter and summer uniforms. It is a modern school we should have a modern look.
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Elaborate, explain or give evidence
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Main Point
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New start. New look
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Main Point
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Winter and Summer uniform
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Main Point
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New uniform
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Conclusion / Summary
In my opinion I think that uniforms are great to wear to school. But it is time for a new uniform when we move into the new school. Get out the old uniform and do not keep it forever.
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Mr Moriarty, it’s time to get out with the old and in with the new. I think we should have a new uniform for our new school because it is a new start. We could have winter and summer uniforms. It is a modern school we should have a modern look.
The first reason we need a new uniform is because you can show a new school to people. Start everything new. Do not keep the old uniform because it’s a new school new uniform.
The second reason a winter and summer uniform because we feel comfortable in cold weather. I come from the Philippines. When I first came to South Hornby School I was cold because we didn't have a winter uniform. The uniform we wear only suits the Summer. We learn when we are comfortable. If we are too hot or too cold we find it hard to learn.
The third reason have a new uniform because It’s time to get a new uniform for a new school. It’s time for a change a new uniform for a new school because Mr M want a new school then we need a new uniform.
In my opinion I think that uniforms are great to wear to school. But it is time for a new uniform when we move into the new school. Get out the old uniform and do not keep it forever because we need a new start .
Bad Good And About From The Volcano
For science my group has been learning about volcanoes. We had to create a something that can explain what we have been learning about for the last couple of weeks. This is my slide show.
I hope you like it!
Tuesday, 1 November 2016
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