I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For science my group has been learning about volcanoes. We had to create a something that can explain what we have been learning about for the last couple of weeks. This is my slide show.
Awesome work Ryan! I love it. You had so many cool facts. You explained so much about good and bad. I even learnt lots of new things. Do volcanoes have karma? You had a bit of sentences that didn't make sense to me. But still amazing. Keep up the awesome work!
Awesome work Ryan! I love it. You had so many cool facts. You explained so much about good and bad. I even learnt lots of new things. Do volcanoes have karma? You had a bit of sentences that didn't make sense to me. But still amazing. Keep up the awesome work!
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Awesome work Ryan! I love it. You had so many cool facts. You explained so much about good and bad. I even learnt lots of new things. Do volcanoes have karma? You had a bit of sentences that didn't make sense to me. But still amazing. Keep up the awesome work!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Ryan! I love it. You had so many cool facts. You explained so much about good and bad. I even learnt lots of new things. Do volcanoes have karma? You had a bit of sentences that didn't make sense to me. But still amazing. Keep up the awesome work!
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