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Thursday 15 September 2016

Cybersmart

This week we have been doing work on PTH which is  positive, thoughtful and helpful comments  in people in your class or syndicate. this is the comment i have done.




Hi Alex
   It is really good but i like your writing about Ryan Archibald because he has a  name like me but next time you need to add more information. By Ryan

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Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well.
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say.
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.