The Spinning TORNADO
“Tubbling-Twistub!, A tornado run!”
Tornado is a dangerous weather that can damage house or home,car or anything but they can kill people from above.
Tornado are strongest weather and it's stronger than a cyclone.
Tornado move speed is 100 kilometer hour.
A Tornado is a spinning weather like a wheel but it’s dangerous like a lightning. A tornado came from in the warm air and cold air they bump together cold air going, down and warm air going up that make a cycle thats where they came from.
I like to see the tornado but not close it’s very danger.
Dear Ryan, Ryan here from Awahono School. Your poem is really powerful and gives you a really good picture about what your writing is about. I never knew that tornadoes were more powerful then cyclones. I thought that cyclones were more powerful because it is a much stronger word. I like how you have written that it is powerful like lighting. Kind Regards Ryan
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