This week we been doing alarm call we have to make a hook story. First I finish my hook or story on google doc. then I finish drawing my picture about the kitten and the goblin. and here is my writing.
Alarm Call
In the beautiful day there was a Scary Goblin live in the Forest close to the old house . “ohhhhhh ahhhhhh seems like there’s a new little human moving to the old house” said the goblin. One night he had a plan “I had an Idea!“ said the goblin. “How about i’ll climb to that old house” said the goblin. He climb on the old house and said the goblin “YES I GOT IN!” when the goblin was walking he heard a noise “ what’s that noise?” said the goblin “AWWWWWWW” he heard a very noisy sound then he look down “oh it's just a kitten” said the goblin then he just step on the kitten and the goblin woke the kitten up then the kitten gets angry “hey little kitten you can't do somethin on me haha and I'M BIGGER THAN YOU!” and the kitten get even angry “haha YOU CAN'T GET ME!” and the kitten gets even anger and then… Then the kitten GRAB! Hes legs THEN SMASH him on the wall and the goblin said “ okey okey you can do something on me “ then the kitten throw him at the window and landed into hard floor and the goblin said “ awwww that was hurt” .
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